Thursday, September 1, 2011

Thursday Tutorials: Advice from Literary Agent Rachelle Gardner

I found this incredible article from Literary Agent Rachelle Gardner and loved it. So that's going to be today's Thursday tutorial.

Here is a copy of her post:

You Are Not Tolstoy or Dickens?

Whenever I talk about the guidelines and conventions that are expected in today’s fiction—for example, don’t go overboard with description, or… show, don’t tell—I always get writers pushing back with the classic “classics” argument.
They’ll say things like, “But what about Charlotte Bronte? What about F. Scott Fitzgerald? You’d probably reject THEM if they came across your desk, too.”
Yep, I just might. This is not 1925 nor is it 1847. This is 2011 and the trends today are different – readers want something different. Neither Bronte nor Fitzgerald were competing with television, video games, the world wide web or BLOGS to get readers’ attention.
How is a reader today different than a reader 100 years ago? Let us count the ways.

1. We are more worldly.

Typical educated people in the industrialized west have seen much of the world with their own eyes, whether through movies and television or by traveling. By contrast, the typical reader as little as 60 years ago may not have ventured beyond their own small corner of the world, and therefore when reading, enjoyed and even required long passages of description to understand the world in which a novel took place.

2. We’re more impatient and are easily bored.

It’s no secret, our lives seem to move at a much faster pace than generations past. People’s brains are wired differently now, and most of us need the stimulation of a faster moving story or we’ll lose interest. Quick-cut movies and TV shows, fast-paced computer games, the point-click-instant-gratification of the Internet, and our generally overly-busy and fragmented lives have all contributed.

3. We’re conditioned for “show, don’t tell.”

We’ve grown up on movies and TV; without even realizing it, we expect to be “shown” a story as on a movie screen, rather than “told” as in a book. Even when we’re reading a book.

4. Language itself changes over time.

And this is totally normal. While it’s tempting to lament the decline of the English language and declare that nobody cares anymore, people have had this same complaint for hundreds of years. The novels of today aren’t going to read like the novels of 50, 100 or 500 years ago simply due to the evolution of language.
What are some more reasons - cultural and psychological - that books and/or readers today are different from those 100+ years ago?
Meanwhile, resist the urge to compare today’s books to old classics! It won’t get you anywhere… least of all published.
Feel free to puruse her original article and website here. It is great you won't be disappointed!

~Danica Page


  1. Danica,

    This is some great advice. Thanks for pointing it out.

    It made me think of the story that I just finished reading in my English class, A Rose For Emily. The only thing I really didn't like about the story--I understand that it needs to be read in the context of its time, but it's just a really ugly word for me--was the number of times I saw the word 'nigger'. I wanted to circle them all with my red marker as an exercise. Just an example of how language changes over time--a modern day writer would never dream of using the word 'nigger' several times in their narration.

    Thanks for pointing this out,

  2. I'm glad I could point out some advice that you found helpful.

    Your discussion point was very interesting...and yes it's fascniating how language turns over time.

    Thanks for the comment, and sorry it took me so long to respond.


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